Sorry but you dont understand

by JodiieBaybeh   Nov 12, 2005


You say im lovely
but how can that be?
ive lied to you from the start
..you know nothing about ME
you see what i want you to
the happy part of me
i keep my true feelings from you
cause i know were not meant to be
i know you wouldnt understand
what really goes on in my head
you have no idea how much i cry
and how much i have bled
you can do so much better
dont think im lying to you
im just not ready for you to see
the dark nasty TRUE part of me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I can totally relate to this poem. It touches home for me. Defiantly a 5/5. Take care and keep writing.. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    :) Just had to comment twice :P

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw wow, I can definetly relate to this hun, it's beautiful the way it was written it just seemes effortless and so clean & lovely. I love those types of poems, this is fantastic, well done, take care

  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Nice, it's very personal and i can relate.
    You've expressed yourself well and your choice of words fit perfectly.
    This flows well throughout, well done, 5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw wow, I loved this one, I seriously ADORE it, I can definetly relate to this right now, You're not alone hun I'm always here and so are the rest of us on this site, we will help you if you and we may not understand everything but we've all gone through something similar that's why were here, stay strong, take care,xxoo

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