Don't you hate it when people leave one line comments?

^^Just kidding. This poem was fantastic. I loved all of it, it painted such a picture in my mind. Very well done, I'm looking forward to reading more. Amazing. Full points from me, that was great.

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I GET THIS NOW!!!. now that this makes sence its so poetic wen u sed stting in a bathroom i didnt realise she was sitting on the toilet omg this is truely art its all so clear now bravo