by lostlllsoul Nov 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I stand alone |
TYhis was a powerful poem I gave it a 5/5!!! I know how you feel and if you ever need to talk you can always come here. I think its great that you can write because you can let some of the hurt in the poem...Keep on writing and smiling =) |
by Mezmeryz
Ohh me god! wat a flipping sad poem:'(...i feel soooo sorry for you!! hey but you know ill always be there for you...to talk to..bout anything...keep strong..like you are..always..and thanks for your advice the other day!! |
by Kayla
I can tell how you felt when you wrote this...the details are great and the emotion is powerful...Thanks for the comments on my poems... |
Well....I feel like I can relate to this poem because when I first started writing I wrote poems that were alike this one. I don't think it's a five; although, the meaning is important, the rhyming scheme and simple words kind of bring down the poem. I did enjoy it though. |
That is a great poem the expression and descriptions so clear you did a great job on it |