Oh
my
god
thats so sad, yet so powerful. really amazing. hope its all okay, god, i really hope ur alright... im here if u need to talk.
Ashes

Hey thats was a great poem mabe u can read and rate mine?

None of this should happen to anyone...I know it's hard to forget about it...but I know u r a strong girl 2...wish u the best...don't let the past haunt u...I know u won't...

Omg hun that was an amazing but really sad poem:'(.
no-one should have to go through that..at all..you expressed your anguish in this really well.
take care xoxoxox

That is a great poem the expression and descriptions so clear you did a great job on it

Well....I feel like I can relate to this poem because when I first started writing I wrote poems that were alike this one. I don't think it's a five; although, the meaning is important, the rhyming scheme and simple words kind of bring down the poem. I did enjoy it though.
Christa

I can tell how you felt when you wrote this...the details are great and the emotion is powerful...Thanks for the comments on my poems...

XOXO
Kayla

Ohh me god! wat a flipping sad poem:'(...i feel soooo sorry for you!! hey but you know ill always be there for you...to talk to..bout anything...keep strong..like you are..always..and thanks for your advice the other day!!
xxx

TYhis was a powerful poem I gave it a 5/5!!! I know how you feel and if you ever need to talk you can always come here. I think its great that you can write because you can let some of the hurt in the poem...Keep on writing and smiling =)