Comments : What if?

  • 19 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey there! good one! I loved ur vocab use... really impressive! but I thought generally it could flow more. be a little smoother in places but I really enjoyed it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    I agree with ruthie! but i really like ur whole idea! its so true! ur poems r always different and i like it! keeps my intrigued!