by falling star Nov 13, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I'm fading in the twilight |
Excellent! 5/5! |
by silent eyes
I LOVE your poems |
by Dreams
Beautiful lines here. Excellent stuff. The repetitions make the flow go smoother, the transition to go better. I like how you link the first and last stanza, it's like there's a start and a clear ending. Great set of words used here. I think I'll never get enough of it. =D |