Comments : Fading

  • 19 years ago

    by Dreams

    Beautiful lines here. Excellent stuff. The repetitions make the flow go smoother, the transition to go better. I like how you link the first and last stanza, it's like there's a start and a clear ending. Great set of words used here. I think I'll never get enough of it. =D

  • 19 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I LOVE your poems
    god its so good

  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    Excellent! 5/5!