Time to wake up

by falling star   Nov 13, 2005


It's raining outside
the light is gone
time to wake up
to another dawn

I used to have a light
but it didn't want to stay
I thought it was hidden
but my heart gave it away

the dark has finally won
it chased out the light
the good feelings are gone
with not one in sight

I thought the light was strong
but it fell apart
I guess the light was weak
just like my broken heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    I've got 1 word for this Amazing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Love it hunn
    keep it up
    my nick name is also andy lol
    kool
    plz read and comment on mine thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Its incredibly touching keep it up definatly!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    I loved it!!! you did a great job with this poem. i felt all of the emotion. I know how you feel. Things get better, i promise! i give you 6/5, it was awesome!
    Luv,
    waiting4prince~charming

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