by Mistress Nov 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Thine lips touch mine |
*shiver* nicely done |
by Dreams
Wow, it's a really dark love. You speak of death with love and relating them together. It's like another level of love you're speaking here. It left me thinking for full 10 mins trying to grasp hold of what this poem is trying to express. Though I'm not sure what I've see is what you've been trying to portray, I still enjoy this piece. Please go on writing. =) |