Revenged

by Mistress   Nov 13, 2005


Darkness falls, my dear
Shadows and whispers art drawing near
Lying down at my feets I can taste thy fear

Thou speak more - I hear less
Thou plea for thy life but I'm meciless
Revenge tastes sweet I must confess

I must admire thy will to live
But it only awakens my urge to kill
For the revenge, for the thrill

Daybreak comes, my dear
Sunlight and chirping of birds art drawing near
Lying by my side I can taste thy tears

Thou art silent - after my knifes caress
I'm all alone with this emptyness
Revenge tastes bitter I must confess

I admired thy will to live
But it only awoke my urge to kill
To take revenge, to feel the thrill

With blood on my hands
and with the sweet taste of victory on my lips
With tears in my eyes
and with the bitter taste of loss in my heart
Revenge is mine

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Iâ??m

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Amazing poem. Very sad and dark but full of emotion and flow. Keep up the great work!

    ~*Much Love.....Haily

  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, it dark and emotional.

    migth want to fix the Iâ??m things though

  • 19 years ago

    by Dreams

    Sweet. This is definitely dark and it truly speaks well. The repetitions of the stanzas enhance the emotions spreading through these lines. Though I'm not very sure of the old-english-style you have here, but it seems appropriate to me. I've enjoyed it. Every single word. Nice write. =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Megadrive

    That was pretty good, I really liked it! try using more commas and periods so the reader knows when a setance is over. I do for some odd reason like this line
    "I must admire thy will to live
    But it only awakens my urge to kill
    For the revenge, for the thrill"
    Anyways good job!

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