by Lauren Nov 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Deep beneath the skin and bone, |
by SuicideQueen
Great imagery, and a good strong flowing rhyme 5/5 xx |
by SethM
Overall excellent poem. Might I make a suggestion though? Take the second line and change "it's" to "it is" I think that would make the poem flow more liquid-like. Great jorb. |
Ohh this is beautiful, Very unique concept to do the "map of the human heart" but it's very true and very deep I loved it, your vocabulary was amazing, excellent work, keep it up & take care lubb |
by shadowlight
This poem is very very good. i loved the emotion in it |