This poem is very very good. i loved the emotion in it

Ohh this is beautiful, Very unique concept to do the "map of the human heart" but it's very true and very deep I loved it, your vocabulary was amazing, excellent work, keep it up & take care lubb

Overall excellent poem. Might I make a suggestion though? Take the second line and change "it's" to "it is" I think that would make the poem flow more liquid-like. Great jorb.

Without wax,
Seth

Great imagery, and a good strong flowing rhyme 5/5 xx