Comments : From my view

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    That was sad and it had a very good flow. I liked the ending.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by sirius

    That is a great poem it flows very wel.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Thats so good, i can really relate to that great job!-xxx-