I think i understand. I'm punjabi buh ya in understand a bit of hindi. I found this poem a bit sad styll. Good tho.

Hi Again,

The poems i read of u before reflects a diff person but this one is far too dark. Though to be honest i worship Dark poems...but simply took the cake with thisone. Hope this was ur imagination for pain and not that u hv to go thro this coz if u did..all i can say is "Hold On" good times are yet to come...

Great work once again...keep it up.

Well done! It's very touching. It seems it came out straight from your heart. Once again loved the style of your writting! Great job!

Es shyair ne to mere akhon mei ashoon ladiye aapne to meri dil ki haar dard ko lik dali shiaad esi leye mei aapki dard bhi ehsaas karsakti hoin. thnx so much.

sonam