Wow Brad what a really touching and thought- provoking poem, i really hope you are ok. hey ur almost as good as me as writing poems. please check my hundreds of poem, howwver there is a monthly subscription of £5.00. i am black.

Wow great poem.Its so sad though.I've been reading your poems over and over again and they seem to be sad or its like your elsewhere.But yet again i love your work.5/5.

disturbing thoughts drench his soul
so many things left unfound
but when he writes feelings leak
and silently kill without word or sound

LOVE YA LOTS,

CORIE>:-x

Oh my god thats so scaery I got hit by a car I hope he dies.......email me please at andreafrand@hotmail.com

Heyy.. love this poem... i hope your feeling okay and slowly day by day getting better! i stilll can't find the poem "when"!!! it's not on your list of poems!!!!! where is it??
xo adge

I really liked your poem . sorry about the accident it must have took a lot of courage to write about it , keep it up =)

A very good poem, almost like poetical masturbation 5/5.

Dang. I'm sorry dude. Man that shows how amazing God is. You weren't even in the back seat and you have more damage than the people in the front seat and it was an head on collision. That's an awesome poem. 5/5
-vino

Oh, what a day indeed, and you told it completely with good rhythm. Nice work though not a nice incident.