I feel tha same way you do, your story is just like mines and i don't know what 2 do. GOOD JOB!!

That was a really good poem, and I know exactly how you feel. The worst pain you could ever feel is a broken heart. I got my heart broken not too long ago, and I really don't think there's anything you can do to fix it. I wish there was, though. Just be strong and you'll get through it!

Anything else?

Another great poem, Very sad and emotionel=( ugh Girls break to many hearts! (But hey u have to admite guys do the same) lol ur a very talented poet! keep up the good work... but I hope u find what u r looking for, and can be happy once again.

I can totally relate to you and love is hurtful alot of the time. I hope you are ok and best wishes to you. Thankyou for commenting on my poems, i appreciate it so so much!

Hey I know how you feel
this was well writtin and I really like all your other poems
keep up the good work and keep your head high

David, David, David, another magnifecent poem to add to your collection! Have you tried my advice from before? Did it work..Or no? Hopefully it is working, because I dont want to see you down in the lumps. Although you do write some good poetry when you are :D

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Hey! That was really good work. As for giving you hope, the only thing I can say is that if it's meant to be and you feel you can't go on without her, she'll come back to you one day - you have to wait with open arms... But frankly, love does blind people from the truth, and she might not be the one for you - in which case, you can love her all your life, but share other love with another. Someone will love and cherish you more than you could believe. I know you'll make it through this. Love and hugs, keep your chin up, and ur writing going, I'm really impressed. :)

This poem shows promice. Perhaps you try to force the rhymes too mush tho. I find I like my poems to rhyme to but sometimes though its hard the best thing to do is to go with the flow of the feelings and not MAKE it rhyme if it does not fit with what you want to write.

Okay.

This is a really good poem.
5/5

*sighs*

Why the sighs*? im sad i know.. sorry.

Amazing as always... your poem was absoultly beautiful in a sad sort of way... i love all of your poem and your going on my favorites list!!! nice job... keep it up!

sammie