An Immortal's Love

by Sayuri   Nov 13, 2005


My hands are stained
with blood,
My eyes are full
of tears,
I can no longer hide from
my deepest fears.
I run and try to find
a safe place,
But everything is lost
without a single trace.
Where are you my love?
I look toward the
sky above.
The night breeze is cool.
I can't believe I was
such a fool.
Together we cannot be,
Because of me.
My blood is immortal,
My body is dead,
No real tears do I shed.
But you are alive.
A young man of mortal flesh.
Your blood is still so fresh.
So fresh,don't let me take it
For you might not make it.
I love you.
Coming from the mouth of a vampire,you can be sure it's true.
I cannot make you into one of us.
Please my darling,my word you must trust.
But I can leave you with this.
A small vile with my Blood Kiss.
Use my blood only for protection
For who ever tries to hurt you
will come to me for redemption.
So please wear it always
For it will protect you
for the rest of your days.
I love you my darling,
For always and forever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by shattered and broken

    Very beautiful, such a sad thought of finding someone you love and not being able to have them.....Keep writing I loved the poem.
    Always-
    Shattered and Broken

  • 19 years ago

    by Rosechild

    I think this poems is great! It's so romantic! I like becuse it decribes many things.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dreams

    'My eyes are full
    of tears,' I feel that if you change the full to filled, it'd flow better? But maybe it's just me, if that is so, ignore me. :)

    'will came to me for redemption.'
    it should be 'will come...'?

    Anyway, I really enjoyed this piece, it flows very well, except for a few parts near the end. I like the concept behind it. There're lots of emotions here too, sadness, yearning... it's all felt. good stuff.

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Awwwww, a gothic romance. Awesome. Very tragic and emotional, yet you fitted it all so perfectly. I love how you are talking about a vampire woman who will live forever, and at the end of the poem the words are:
    'I love you my darling, always and forever.'
    Wonderfully ironic ey lol. Please keep writing, this poem shows you have talent. It's not easy to write these sort of poems and pull it off, but I sense you wrote it from the heart. That's the way to do it. 5/5.

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

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