Ironic Love

by Matters   Nov 13, 2005


We'd dance through all the ocean,
We'd swim through all the fields,
We'd stray too close to the footpath,
We'd ignore the helpful yields.

We'd laugh at all our sorrow,
We'd cry through brilliant love,
We'd try to be unnoticed,
We'd regard the things above.

We'd sing our special song,
We'd hum our witty tune,
We'd think of all the random,
We'd run across the moon.

We'd have our one small secret,
We'd share it through a word,
We'd call each other idiocy,
We'd listen to the unheard.

We'd look each other in the eye,
We'd have the moment's kiss,
We'd overlook the whole world,
We'd capture the endless bliss.

We'd love to hate each other,
We'd taunt our own mistakes,
We'd know our love would last forever,
We'd do whatever it takes.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dory

    You know i love this one :-) i love all ur poems andi cnt choose wich one i like the best. Please vote and comment on my new poem.there are more to come

  • 19 years ago

    by sobreviviente

    Your poetry is so beautiful. I can hardly believe that a young boy could write like you do. Keep it up. I think it's a gift to you from God.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Man...that's awesome...how can you say mine is good compare 2 yours...u r truly gifted...I am just a teenage girl...who just wants 2 let her feeling out in a poem...well...nice one...definitely a masterpiece...

  • 19 years ago

    by Eyes_Of_Rain

    Matt,
    This is a lovely and whimsical, carefree poem. I like it a lot, however, I think it would be perfect if you'd edit one thing. I'd interchane the words dance, and swim on the first two lines, to read.. swim through oceans and dance through the fields instead of vice-versa. Full points luv'.
    Be well poet.

    ~Sherry~

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem matt!!
    you really are an amazing writer...
    i hope your special girl sees this...it's truly something to keep forever..
    take care xoxoxoxo

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