WOW, amazing job hun, I loved it, :) You have real talent here hun, I loved how you made it all unique and it looks very neat for some reason, if you know what I mean hehe, Some poems are just all over the place but your poetry is very beautiful and just where it needs to be, this is a gift my dear, dont ever change who you are, take care, xxoo

Awesome poem matt!!
you really are an amazing writer...
i hope your special girl sees this...it's truly something to keep forever..
take care xoxoxoxo

Matt,
This is a lovely and whimsical, carefree poem. I like it a lot, however, I think it would be perfect if you'd edit one thing. I'd interchane the words dance, and swim on the first two lines, to read.. swim through oceans and dance through the fields instead of vice-versa. Full points luv'.
Be well poet.

~Sherry~

Man...that's awesome...how can you say mine is good compare 2 yours...u r truly gifted...I am just a teenage girl...who just wants 2 let her feeling out in a poem...well...nice one...definitely a masterpiece...

Your poetry is so beautiful. I can hardly believe that a young boy could write like you do. Keep it up. I think it's a gift to you from God.

You know i love this one :-) i love all ur poems andi cnt choose wich one i like the best. Please vote and comment on my new poem.there are more to come