I think the end kind of stopped suddenly but other then that it was great. I was kind of expecting another line like "This time it was like death" but then again leaving it with Hatred makes a very powerful statement so either way it was great! good job!

Great poem again, I have only read a few of your poems but have felt the emotion in all of them. Keep that up, it's what i liek in poems, and i explained my poem at the end if you want to know still!
OXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie

Awww aaron i like this one because you express so many different emotions at once. although u sound really pissed off, there is still a vulnerablity, a sadness....idk i can't descibe it but its really, very good, i like it a lot. im srry tho, for what u had to go thru to be able to write this.
its different....has more pain in it....i think it makes it beautiful.
take care,
xoxo~*rachel

Very sad...Painfull, powerfull, but superb! 5/5

This poem is very powerful and you express your emotions so well.