by Princess09 Nov 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Eyes so precious, |
by Sole
Aweomse poetry, my favourite so far. I really enjoyed reading this, nice work. |
by Ariana
Really nice piece 0f work here, it is quiet and original idea. I liked how you ended it optimistically with your main character rising above the situation. I'd recommend not ending with an exclamation mark because it makes it sound less serious at the end. |
by Samantha
The subject of your poem isn't widely written upon, or at least I don't read a lot of poetry about spousal abuse. I like the backbone of this poem. |
by Brokeback
Such a beautiful poem, really ! |
by sarah
Absolutely love this poem. you are such a simple writer and that makes your poems so understanding. |