That was a very strong poem but i didnt feel the emotion behind the words. it was a great poem none the less though.

Wow! you write almost as if you experinced it all. one minor detail that you might want to work on is line rhythm. a few lines seemed a bit too long, but only like 1 or 2. other wise this was truly amazing

Another 5/5

Really loved it ,it's heartfelt and sweet.some stuff:1st stanza-lips were used?2nd stanza-is guy supposed to be on the third line?I think it sounds better there...4th and 5th stanzas some spelling errors but overall really good. brittany

A strong poem but beautifully written. I like poems about peoples life experiences, it helps you to understand and know the person better. Keep it up.

Absolutely love this poem. you are such a simple writer and that makes your poems so understanding.
take care

Such a beautiful poem, really !

xxx

The subject of your poem isn't widely written upon, or at least I don't read a lot of poetry about spousal abuse. I like the backbone of this poem.

And thanks for the comments on my poetry. :)

Really nice piece 0f work here, it is quiet and original idea. I liked how you ended it optimistically with your main character rising above the situation. I'd recommend not ending with an exclamation mark because it makes it sound less serious at the end.

Aweomse poetry, my favourite so far. I really enjoyed reading this, nice work.

Peace. [Sole]