What happened?
by DeParis Oliver Nov 14, 2005
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As i sit here, i wonder what happened to us and the love we used to share! for you i would change and for you i would die... it used to be vice versa but know it seems like only one person makes this relationship and trust it's not you! Why can't it be the way it used to be where when we say i love you we actually meant those words. and when one cried so did the other because we felt each other's pain! i want that feeling back! i want the old love we had or else I'll have to say good-bey. good- bye to these sad days and hello to new ones. i could never really imagine my life without you and i really don't want to but i refuse to be left behind with my heart and soul slowly fading. all i ever asked for was love and you promised to give just that. so what's the next step? life or death? whether you know it or not those are the only options for me because with you i truly live life, but without you I'm just another lost soul torn between real love.... |
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16 years ago
... i know the kind of sadness that you talk of, i had that kind of sadness for a long time in my life.. but what ever your situation is right now, know that it does go away, yes you will never forget, but remember only good ones, remeber only the true ones. you expressed your feelings very well in the poem, it just shows you that you dont have to make it rhym to let it be a great storie of your feelings.. but for me personally i like stuff that rhyms, i think it shows more skill and effert, but none the less you have shown your feelings and that is just as good..
