... i know the kind of sadness that you talk of, i had that kind of sadness for a long time in my life.. but what ever your situation is right now, know that it does go away, yes you will never forget, but remember only good ones, remeber only the true ones. you expressed your feelings very well in the poem, it just shows you that you dont have to make it rhym to let it be a great storie of your feelings.. but for me personally i like stuff that rhyms, i think it shows more skill and effert, but none the less you have shown your feelings and that is just as good..