They Say I've Got It All

by Torn   Nov 14, 2005


They say she's got it all,
They say that she's bright.
That she can be what she wants,
So why is she giving up the fight?

But they don't look into the mirror,
And see what she sees.
Her broken, f u c k e d up self,
She can't bring herself to breathe.

They don't see her hidden scars,
Her tear-stricken eyes.
Her heart being ripped apart,
By all the pain and the lies.

They don't see her lethal dreams,
The ones where she's dead.
Where life has finally ended,
And she's buried under lead.

I'm broken and bleeding,
Nothings stopping this pain
No amount of pressure,
Nothing will let her gain.

*um..having a really bad day..would really love your comments guys...xoxo

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That's incredible, I guess I can really relate unfortunately, I think it makes it worse when ppl tell you everything's fine. 5/5 again, don't know how you do it!
    Luv Helen xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    She can't bring herself to breathe.

    Theres something in the rythym of that line. once again. awesome job.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    I like it a lot, but the last stanze confuzzled me.. Keep it strong.

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Realy good i feel like this alot of the time