StOrY Of HeR LiFe!!!

by UnWaNtEd   Nov 14, 2005


She thinks she has no friends,
the knife is always there,
In her life there's so much misery,
and her friends don't even care!

If she were to use the knife again,
or even take that gun,
she is sure her friends will be happy,
and they would finally be having fun!

Its just adding to her scars,
that hide the secrets from her past,
but she cant help how she feels,
her life is moving way too fast!

There's one way to slow it down,
she'll have to use the knife,
once again there'll be a new scar,
to add onto the story of her life!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cierra

    This is good wonder if it's based on something mine is it's called Story Of Her Life you might wanna check it ou tit;s a true story!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Good topic and layout. Great job

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥Sweet Suicide♥ (skuxilicious@hotmail.com)

    Nice one sad though its great! 5/5 and thanks for being there for my mom poem cheerz mate

  • 19 years ago

    by Marissa

    Thanks for the comment. I know exactly how you're feeling in this poem. I've felt like that a lot, but once you open up you find that people DO CARE!! I never thought anyone would care that Im hurting myself but I have friends now who always check up on me and tell me to call them even if it's 3 in the morning. Let close friends (you think you can trust) about your thoughts, it does help!! Good luck with everything!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Hey dis is a reallii great poem! im so soorrruuu i hope ur ok... hold on hun coz it will get bettaa!! luv u ALWAYS luv maddy xxx

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