Hey very touchin poem...
i know how u feel but hurtin urself wont solve anything....
first it'll be knife...then bat...then gun.....then blackness
GET OVER IT
dhaval

Very good poem!! im loving it and ur work

Saying what is lost in most peoples consciousness... i love it, its vivid and real, and what most artistic minded ppl lack

Hi emily it me! jorjie porjie!!!!! WOW great poem, i didnt know u could do that! but i hope they're not about u

Hey dis is a reallii great poem! im so soorrruuu i hope ur ok... hold on hun coz it will get bettaa!! luv u ALWAYS luv maddy xxx

Thanks for the comment. I know exactly how you're feeling in this poem. I've felt like that a lot, but once you open up you find that people DO CARE!! I never thought anyone would care that Im hurting myself but I have friends now who always check up on me and tell me to call them even if it's 3 in the morning. Let close friends (you think you can trust) about your thoughts, it does help!! Good luck with everything!

Nice one sad though its great! 5/5 and thanks for being there for my mom poem cheerz mate

Good topic and layout. Great job

This is good wonder if it's based on something mine is it's called Story Of Her Life you might wanna check it ou tit;s a true story!!!!