I really like this one nice work its sounds like sum1 has hurt you i hope your ok Nicole XoXo

Very good job lady
honestly this one makes me confused you make readers live the event... sometimes it's better to let the steps lead you coz the heart never die but has a rest !!!
it's very very nice one

2 steps forward and never look back

Sad & touchy ;(

5/5

You really want a place to run ?? from what? you want to run from a feeling and a pain inside of you , dose it matter where you are !! will they stop if there is another place?
^_^

i think i have a bit of a pointer here , maybe spliting the poem into stanzas would help the reader a bit , a whole block of lines might make the reader eye abit refusing to read!.

love is awful when we get hurt sint it ? but is it love mistake ,love is only a feeling . but in the wrong lovers hands it can hurt a bunch,!!^_^

CJ