Death and Decay

by Fronz   Nov 14, 2005


People are dying,
but still i live.
i have no intention of crying,
but still i live.

some say that i am cursed,
but still i live.
others say that i am worse,
but still i live.

others fall down,
but still i live.
they with or without a gown,
but still i live.

i am 504 years old,
but still i live.
even now i have not sold,
but still i live.

i see them decaying,
but still i live.
i see them fraying,
but still i live.

i am cursed,
but still i live.
mabey even worse,
but still i live.

i don't know why,
i can't die,
but still i live.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hehehe, nice one Em.
    Josh, i thought that had extroardinary potential but there was a little too much repetition. Mayeb if you only used "but still i live" once every stanza.... i dunno. Poetry is meant to mean something to u, so as longa s that's right, its' all good.
    Rock on!
    -Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    We all get better but you dont NEED to get better that was one of your best pieces of work
    but still i live

  • 19 years ago

    by Fronz

    Ok

  • 19 years ago

    by Fronz

    I need to get better

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