The best part is the bleeding

by Kirsty   Nov 14, 2005


The bloodstain on his sleeve
The hunger in his stare
The loneliness he feels inside leaves his covers feeling bare
There's someone that he's craving
The thought runs through his head
He searches hard to find the blade, ignoring what she said

She's the reason for this
What good are her words to him?
The more she tries, the more he craves, the heartache for him wins
His secret keeps on building
He doesn't want to show
But while he sits and watches her, from that his feelings glow

The emotions hit an overload
He's ready for the kill
He slices through without a doubt just looking for that thrill
He watches each drop fall
The best part is the bleeding
It slowly drowns his spirit, stops his heart from needing

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tine

    Waauw.. This poem is soo good. I really really like this part :
    He watches each drop fall
    The best part is the bleeding
    It slowly drowns his spirit, stops his heart from needing
    That's so serious, and truthfull, really. Keep it up..

    x

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow, I really loved the ending the best best part is the bleeding it stops him from needing that was just a master peice I love it! It was a great poem and I loved how you made it a he.. diffrent =)
    Well done hun you've got talent =D

  • 19 years ago

    by bex

    That's really powerful

    the title fits it perfectly

    this really gives a insight to how the guys mind works

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Very good poem baby
    very sad and true
    lovely
    love u xx

  • 19 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey this is really good, i know exactly how the person you are describing feels 5/5
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

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