by SexyBabe101 Nov 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The rain slatters on the wall, |
by Juls
Its good. I like that you dont need the words to rhyme to make the words mend together so well. Great work |
This is realli good 2, it doesn't rhyme much but who cares coz it haz so much meening in it and datz all dat mattas in the end |
Its hard to believe that someone could write this with the intensity of having experienced who has not. I lived many years in a very abusive home and so much of what you wrote I have either experienced, thought or felt, |
by Betty Boop
I like it again..... I feel sorry for who ever it was written bout.... |