I like it again..... I feel sorry for who ever it was written bout....

Its hard to believe that someone could write this with the intensity of having experienced who has not. I lived many years in a very abusive home and so much of what you wrote I have either experienced, thought or felt,

This is realli good 2, it doesn't rhyme much but who cares coz it haz so much meening in it and datz all dat mattas in the end

Its good. I like that you dont need the words to rhyme to make the words mend together so well. Great work

Julie