Really good poem, its short, but it gets the point across, thanxe for pointing out the ball and puck mistake in my poem lol i never would of noticed it 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I really like this poem... I can really relate to it a lot! cause thoughts like that go through my head all the time! good job=) very deep emotions in this poem.

This is deep truthful. its the lies we lead ourselve to believe. good job

This is an excellent poem, really meaningful, very well writen,5/5, take care xxx

This poem was really really good!

Master Of Shadow,
Yet again another great poem, there is so much depth in it, so true in the way many people may feel through out the world.
Keep it up
-Ashley

Oh, wow. The flow wsn't very easy for me, but it really called out. Your words are everywhere!