Bradley ...
Wow I got the shivers wondering what dark place this person is in...
It held my interest till the very end..The title fit so well ...

The title reminded me of Freddy Kruger.. 1..2 I'm coming for you..LMAO
Great job Bradley ...

Wow...dude thats a really good poem, i like the way you dont tell us where she is..thats for our own minds to make up. Brilliant poem, nice rhymeing scheme and all. Top Poem :) feel free to read any more of mine, some are alot like yours.
Cya
Brad

Very great. love the rhyme and all
5/5

Love it 5/5 awsome so much feeling you have a gift lol

Loved it..n thanks for commenting on my poems..means a lot to me...keep it up 5/5

Awwwwwwww.....i love itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u have an amazing mind.

I remember your last words, "be happy and take care"
but i can't be happy now, the pain's too much to bare
if i get there too late, and you lay still in the dark
I'll cry in such anger, and a new mission I'd embark
I'd reach into my pocket, and lift my trusty knife
because if your gone, i wish too to lose my life
but that won't come about, I'll save you before the end
so you just sit and wait, because on me you can depend
This was was favorite part, I really felt the emotion all though this, expecailly at the end it nearly made me tear up, so sad, so deep, and the pain seems so real. I like the way you write, you have real talent, I knew you weren't a novice, The flow was great dead on, the vocab was excellnt, really powerful, I liked this poem better than I did the other one. Keep up the good work, and I will keep reading. 5/5