My first EVER poem... I'm just feeling kind of down cos I lost my love, and hanging on to the hope that I'll find her again. So yeah, my first poem, be gentle, I know it has more than 10 syllables per line but wanted to say what i feel.

That was a really good poem, very touching, and hang in there. I just got my heart broken not too long ago so I know how you're feeling. It's hard.

I hope it gets better... cos this pain is too much for me.

Nice poem 5/5 you should check out some of my olove poems

I hope you're not disappointed in the end