That was a great poem. a lot of emotion is a logical way. it was good.

Captivating poem

I actually felt the emotion in this poem. i had shivers going down my neck. that was such a sad poem. good job.

I gave it a 5/5 ... you're really good.. i also added you to my favorites.

Ooh i liked it! I loved it and your poem made me feel like i was in it kind of thing. It was very good :)

Hey ronni baby medina valley is messes up but come on we all loved u

I did a poem using the same title -- try not using conjunctions and feel free to critique my work

Wow i can so realte to this everyhting changed when u go from 8 to 9 really 5/5 my new fav

I love this poem.
I'm in 8th grade right now,
and I can totally relate!
You're a great poet.
The flow of those poem was really good.
5/5

Wow.. This is really sad. I am assuming that there is an upseting story to go along with this poem. I hope things are better now.

Tiffany.xox.

Beautifully written poem.. i remember when i was in grade eight well i am in grade 8 lol... yea i loved how you spoke of your own experiences that is aways great and how you spoke how you felt also awesome! =) and also very unique title you chose for your poem.. we all get caught up in memories that we can see thru to reality once again great write keep it up =)

--emotionless19*