LOVED IT! every word, every sentence. every phrase. beautiful. i partcularly liked the beginning:
"It feels like nothing-
Hurts like everything.
You turn the room upside down,
And I fall awake.
This is the worst pain I have had to take."
so oxymoronic that it makes perfect sense with the conflicts. wow!
keep writing, please! your soo talented and i love reading your work! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!