by Karla Gordon Nov 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I tried to make you happy |
I like this-very straightforward and totally honest.It is well written, perhaps could use a couple minor touch ups to flow smoother or add more impact, but what and how you say it and the emotion one feels in every line are what give it such honesty and power. |
You pleased me greatly. |