When You Feel...

by Christina Gomes   Nov 15, 2005


Walk down the street
Leaves crunch below
Sky so blue up above
You don't know where to go

Thoughts crumble here
You feel the walls closing in
Looking for a place to rest
A place where you can win

You're slowly losing grip
Tears edging your eyes
You can't think of anything else
Except these swarming why's

You take a look around
And feel there's no other way
You start to choke on workds
You wish you would just say

You're falling even faster
It's hard to hold back anymore
But let it out, Im right beside you
Because thats what a best friend is for.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Yay, you wrote again! So nice to read something new from you. And this was just absolutely great. You definitely captured a best friend. And I know that you're myyyyy best friend and exactly what a best friend should be :-) I love you tons and tons

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Amazing!! Just check the spelling, you spelled "workds" when its actually "words"! But it was good anyway, 5.5 AMAZING! A+ =)

  • 19 years ago

    by NiCoLe

    Omg its really good i really like it well done i wish i could write something like that
    NiCoLe XoXo