Torn inside

by .:Breezy:.   Nov 15, 2005


On the out side i look strong
i smile and wave
acting like its all ok
but I'm just fooling the world

deep in side i want to cry
your tearing me up
inch by inch
word by word

I'm living a lie
i don't know how to live anymore
how to really smile
how to be happy

show me the way
tape up the fallen pieces
make it all right again
put me back together

please.......

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  • 19 years ago

    by WtrmlnLvr

    Hi....i think that your poem is really good! Lots of people feel that way, i myself would be one of them. It s hard when you feel as if your worlds falling apart and you don't know how to set it right! Well i seem to be able to relate to you but i'm sure there are many others that could too! Well maybe if you try you could get some of you poems published so keep up the great writing!!Hey if you feel like it check out some of my poems and tell me what you think!! Catch you later!!~bye~