Hi....i think that your poem is really good! Lots of people feel that way, i myself would be one of them. It s hard when you feel as if your worlds falling apart and you don't know how to set it right! Well i seem to be able to relate to you but i'm sure there are many others that could too! Well maybe if you try you could get some of you poems published so keep up the great writing!!Hey if you feel like it check out some of my poems and tell me what you think!! Catch you later!!~bye~