by Princess09 Nov 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Smiles and tears, |
by Dreams
I like the rhyme you have there. though this poem tells a sad story but it comes with a hint of happiness, like somewhere somehow the love will always be there. this speaks of a separated love and it touches me. Very nice! |
by aaron c s
That was such a sweet yet sad poem. the two emotions collided together beautifully. i loved the rhythm. |