Comments : Oh Beautiful One ~Shooting Star~

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    An excellent poem. =] Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I hate reading your poems, cuz I'm always like :why do I even bother, this girl blows me out of the water".

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    So very lovely.

    Someone has you as their "beautiful one" I bet...

    "Nows your back in my atmosphere"

    Did you mean, "Now your back is in my atmosphere"?

    blush
    xxxxx