LiFe Or dEaTh!

by hm   Nov 15, 2005



umm I'm having a real hard time in my life right now and i just need sum advise on what 2 do because I'm walking a 1 way road that is to my death.....this is what i want please tell me what u people think....

Standing on the bridge thinking doing this what will i learn
but i guess death happens 2every1 n its just my turn
I'm scared,but this is what i want and confidence is Wat i need 2 gain!
so i step a little closer 2 the edge and my tears flow in the dark nights rain!
so i apologize to god as I'm about to commit a deathly sin
I'm sorry but the evil has control and will soon win
so i jump and start an afterlife and 4get the painful past
heaven or hell i don't care I'm just happy i have left this place at last
family friends etc yea the whole lot
they didn't care so now i will in the earths core is where i will root
so as i fall i say
GOODBYE GOODBYE to all i love and those mad me cry
GOODBYE GOODBYE to all that i once in my life need and to all who made me bleed!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Well this poem say exacly how i feel too... and well you need to be strong and fight back

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Collins

    All of your poems are great. you really do have talent and you should keep using it. in some poems i could say that i can relate and if you ever need someone to talk to just get a hold of me cause i can help.

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Thank you so much for your comments, they help a lot in times of sorrow... I hope that you are ok, I've also been on the edge so many times, You just gotta be strong enough to hold back.
    Love your quotes!
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Hey babe, i love y0o hun, if u check out my quotes ther is 1 2 y0o...please love me always, never leave me coz u r the one i love....i cant stop thinking about y0o, i wish y0o were here wif me, i miss y0o so much....n from now on i promice of our realtionship i wont cut, cozi love u n y0o r what is gonna hold me bak coz my love 4 y0o is so strong

    call me later babe

    luv ya

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