No one is in this place but me

by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]   Nov 15, 2005


The steep dirt road to nowhere
everything is so dark
there is nothing there
theres nothing in this park

no children happy with joy
swinging on the swings
no birds twirping
or flapping their colorful wings!

there is nothing here!
just this road and me!
i walk here all alone
where no one else can see

the hurt and the pain
burning up inside!
now i don't have to pretend
my feelings i don't have to hide!

cause i am all alone
no one to be seen!
this is the darkest place
to where i have been!

i walk along the rocky path
just me and my trusty knife!
i walk along and kick the stones
contemplating my life!

the grass is not green....
there isn't anything bright
it all feels like my life
because there is no light!!

i wrote this poem feeling really alone in this world and feeling like no one cares, there a lot bringing me down and i don't no what to do or how to make it go away

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Hey, this was excellent. ur a very good writer, i love ur poems. hope ur ok,
    and thanku so much for ur comment,it meant a lot.
    lots of luv,
    xxemmaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by UnWaNtEd

    Hey hunni, gr8 poem....u hav real talent...love ya heaps...
    UnWaNtEd

  • 19 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Hey Hun U know im here for you, *hugs*, dont forget you can tell me ne thing and I will always be here for you...All My Love..Joclyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    O huni *hugs so tight*
    please just open your eyes and see those ppl who care so much about u..
    if u ever need to talk or anything please don't hesitate to email me or add me to msn (strawbs1@hotmail.com)
    babe i hope you're ok..stay strong huni
    xoxoxox
    PS: could u plz check out my poems..i value ur opinion and words so much..

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