Comments : My delusion

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    I was definitely caught up in your poem. It's an excellent piece. Great job. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I had it all, I saw perfection,
    In my pure, complete illusion.
    And though I know it'll never be real,
    I'm happy holding onto this delusion.

    this stanza basically describes me this summer....awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wow so emotional and wow great work gurl xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Heya babe...this is awsome!!!!!!!!