I like your poem lots and i'm one of those that is on the end that has two forbidden loves. one likes me but doesn't seem to want to admit it and the other is truly forbidden 'cause he's got a gf and he doesn't care about that fact it seems but i do. especially what God thinks about it all. i feel like queen elizabeth, you know king henry 8th's daughter.
anyway, love it and maybe you could check out mine as well. thanx

Very good and I have a friend who this fits her and me keep up the great work 5/5