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by Fallen4urlies Nov 15, 2005 category : Dark, fantasy / other
* When i woke up this morning it all felt like a dream. * It all felt like a dream * A dream i had no control over * A dream that was not a dream...more like a night mare * A nightmare that took away my world * A night mare that broke my heart * A night mare that told me we were better off just friends * A nightmare that makes me cry * A nightmare that will not go away * A nightmare that will not allow me to smile * A nightmare i will have for awhile * It will not allow me to sleep * Just make it hard for me to breath * Make me suffocate.....a night mare i can not escape... * I do not want this nightmare * I do not want this dream * I do not want this life * ...So please forgive me....
by Hannah Mureen
Hey id say good job, but it sounded more like a speech rather than a poem. it was good, just wasnt very poetic sounding. either way, keep writing! hannah