Omg thats so sad, stay strong(if its about you that is)good job-xxx-

Really good poem. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more.

Sydni

Wow this is so amazing. im speechless its such a great poem. it flows brilliantly, and the emotion seems to be in every word. i feel like that so much. its so sad, and youve totally showed that in the poem. i love this bit:
She hides behind her long hair
always living in the dark
later she will take the razor blade
and tomorrow she will cover up the mark
keep it up your poems are lush!
polly xx

Omg that was the most emotional poem ive ever read, i luvd ur rhymes. i all around luvd this poem frum beginnin 2 end, n this i can completely relate 2. i cant think even slightly of giving this less then a 5/5! keep up the gr8 work!

~*Who Cares?*~

I don't know who is the person in this poem...izzit u or izzit ur sis...well..I certainly hope both of u r fine...this poem is good neway...5/5

Thats good, i like it. It's a pity that scars have to be bared to show people how you feel. The time is now, take it and scars will be spared

I like the way you end poems, the final line or stanza is powerful and gives a good finale. Again, this is about cutting, and cliche, as you probably know. So that's all I'm saying on that area. You give the subjects in the poem a voice with feelings and emotions, which then are passed on to the reader; this is important and good for a poem to have, so well done. Only real suggestion I have is try some punctuation in the poem, even if it's just apostrophes. Keep writing.

I love it i could almost relate to how she feels. keep it up. i love it

love heather

God that is a good poem, I wish I was that good. Keep it up
But anywho, You might like to read some of my work, it would be greatly appraciated.

Darkest Wishes
Matt

Wow that was really emotional... you are a great writer... it seems so real when you read it.... keep it up...
sammie

Oh baby, sweet sweet angel, it hurts me so bad to read this, to hear how much your suffer, I wish I could do something, to wipe away some of your pain, to help you live again. I know no one ever did for me, and I wouldn't want you do feel that way, so d*** alone.

-Mikochan

This poem touched my heart, its very emotional. Its a really deep feeling poem. Love your poetry
keep it up
tara xxx

Very good! Great job on this one. . .*

Once again, good work on putting a new spin on that type of poem.

Love it as usual 5/5!!

I love it..full of sadness and emotions. The 4th and 5th stanzas lost the rhyme(sp?) but than it was regained back in the end. Great work and im glad i read it.
Juls