That was beautiful... and very heartfelt... It has a kind of sad sweetness...

--5/5--

Love,
Ipsita

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:( this is sad, but well written!! very well written!! its touching too..it touched me:) i love your poems, they are unique and very great. keep it up:)
love ya~
-Britt

So sad and dismal. What a change from out typical Kumar...

And what a story ... the clear imagery - the subject of loss and tragedy. The vibrancy of it all ... so well written.

Every stanza enjoyed.*

5/5

Hey darl. i really liked this p0em. t0uching lines. great use 0f w0rds. havent heard fr0m y0u in a while i really liked it! keep em c0ming. y the 4.4 th0ugh? hmm keep it up
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

Glad to see u writing again
u have beautifully depicted emotions even wen they are sad and gloomy..
nice poem .
chavii.

Wow ones again amazin poem kay good on u mate... keep it upp
i want new poems hehehhe :)
loved it oiii
always smile
peace

Hi again
good job yaar! i love to read ur poems.
i read ur qoutes too. they wer gud.
it has become a part of my day to read one of ur poems and comment.
bharti

Awww dat is really raellly sad.. but its written with soo much passioin and love.

As i get up,the leaves make way for me to genlty walk through,
i wonder whether this journey someday will lead me to you,
i haven't lost the hopes because only on these i survive,
someday you'll get to see me on this very road,dead or alive.

Catching hold of time,i'm slowly crawling towards my end,
my love has always been true,b'coz like you i never pretend,
walking in this darkness shown by you,someday surely i'll die,
then i will ask god,i didn't deserve all these god,"Did I??".

my fav lines.u have proved that the only way to measure the depth of one's love is through a poem.U have actually made us measure the length and depth of your love.5